2011/12/02

"On Time" Self Evaluation with New Edits + Mixes!!


1) Farm Town World

  1. Seems to be playable.

2) Patiences

  1. Seems to be listenable.

3) Place You Get To Go"
  1. But when was the piano out and replaced by and organ! 
  2. Seems to be pretty smooth.
  3. Seems to be listenable.
4) "Work Smart" - Sounds good but needs work!!

  1. Seems to be listenable but still questionable.

5) "Captain/ Jumps Ship/ Paradise Island"
  1. English accent is strange.  I give it an 8.  Music sounds good though.
  2. Background vocals are pretty good, in the back.
  3. Transition sound fine, surprisingly no trouble.
  4. Fade to wind
  5. The title on this song changed from "SpeedBoat" to "Paradise Island"
  6. This song was just notated.
  7. Seems to be pretty listenable.
6) "Afraid of the Dark"
  1. Afraid of the Dark (awkward lyric) 
  2. Afraid of the Dark (5 plays) good version guitar good
  3. Right lyric, good guitar in the background, weird fade
  4. Seems to be listenable.
7) "Lone Ranger"
  1. Good sound effect
  2. strong lyric and lead vocal
  3. Slightly screwed up guitar.
  4. good sound sound effects
  5. back background vocals
  6. the machine guns are not cowboy guns
  7. by 2:24 could start fading but it keep going!
  8. 3:00 minutes!
  9. Break with a horse sounds effect sound good
  10. 3:32!
8) "Face of a Clock" - Sounds good but needs work!!
  1. Good start but goes no where at all.
  2. cut sooner to a vocal
  3. Is there a vocal?
  4. until :52 then it changes and slight distortion
  5. Questionable!
9) "Day Turns Into Night"
  1. strong start and lyric
  2. blow away all this stuff I've had enough (drug reference?/ no)
  3. Chorus sounds good in the headphones anyways)
  4. No perfect but good.
10) •Waltz in G minor

  1. Distorted near the end
  2. Maybe remix after you get the others done.

11) •Zap!

  • strong start 
  • Very listenable
  • good song
  • keeps your attention!

12) Dark Cloud

  • strong start no lyric
  • Sounds good but needs work!!



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