Last night I decided the arrangement of the song did not exist. Seeming endless loop the chorus where I could not tell where I was. To solve this I risk cut out several measures and went back the b-section the same at the song does the first time around. Then later I decide to instead of saving the minor section at the end, use it in the middle.
At the end of the song I decided to bring back the very introduction chords but just with a piano. They are the same chords at the b-section just stripped down. So all together there are only 3 sections of music.
I've been working on a guitar rhythm and arrangement so lyrically and vocally I have to still examine. I just did not want to put more hours in on something that wasn't working as a whole. I'd like to think the song is coming together but I really don't know but I am getting some good guitar practice in.
