2013/02/11

Edits "Jim Dandy" and "Smiley Face"

1) "It's Always Something"
My most requested song.  The chord progression was inspired by a Special AKA song from "In The Studio" (1989). Night on the Tiles

2) "Jim Dandy"
While the song is not too bad, it does go on and on and should end sooner.  Cutting out the extra guitar section the song returns to the the chorus and ends sooner for "Again and Again" to begin.
Why doesn't anybody tell me these things!!

3) "Again and Again"

The chord progression to this song was written naturally, meaning I've didn't have to hunt for them they 'flowed' out.  The lyric on the other hand took week of rewrites until I feel they were great.   The last Chorus of the song is too predicable and boring, I wish the song would fade sooner or just have it instrumental.

4) "She's Is Always On His Mind"
'flowed' out

5) "Still There's Another Day"
'flowed' out

6) "She's My Girl"
'flowed' out

8) "Smiley Face"
'flowed' out

9) "Land of Make Believe"
'flowed' out

10) Round
'flowed' out

While listening closely to the first verse of the other version I can hear it's is much better.  Swap! Wondering how it would sound without the 'Frog Man Vocal' on the fourth verse and shorten the song by 30 seconds? 

• "20 sound effect"

• Three musical edits.

The song ends a 2:31 and it much better than the original 3:00 minute version. Thanks to Norma Aragon for giving me a crazy Mark Mothersbaugh Christmas CD with excellent clown laughs.
They brought the song up to a much more believable level.

Mastering
Compression helped to make the over all track sit together better.